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		<title>Resolutions for the New Year</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 03 Jan 2011 13:00:54 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>movieguyjon</dc:creator>
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As you read this I&#8217;ll be on the road toward California once again, ending my luxurious holiday vacation. I had a lot of fun with the family and I miss them already. Thanks to a rather rocking last few months of 2010, I&#8217;m pretty stoked for what&#8217;s in store in the new year. Here are some goals I&#8217;ve set for myself, separated by topic. YAY LISTS!</p>
<h3>Writing and Projects</h3>
<blockquote><p>-Complete the two scripts I have in early draft stage.</p>
<p>-Write at least 3 more scripts this year.</p>
<p>-Get all current web series ideas through the writing stage.</p>
<p>-Write 3 short films and shop them to Columbia College friends.</p>
<p>-Write Sci-Fi novel I had intended for NaNo.</p>
<p>-Keep track of every day that I write in a cool excel spreadsheet, and try to work my way up to writing something every day.</p>
<p>-Start Hilarious Henry back up, streamline that whole ish.</p>
<p><span style="text-decoration: line-through;">-Write a footnote into my blog for no other reason than amusement and self-deprecation.</span></p>
<p>-Regularly comment on writer/screenwriter blogs.</p></blockquote>
<h3>Personal Stuff</h3>
<blockquote><p>-Get a better job, one that I can stand as well as one that pays more than my current place of employment.</p>
<p>-Go on at least one road trip.</p>
<p>-Be able to pay off at least 1 of my loans.</p>
<p>-Pay off my credit card completely.</p>
<p>-See roughly double the films I saw in 2010 and use <a href="http://www.flickchart.com" target="_blank">flickchart</a> to keep track of them.</p>
<p>-Play through at least 5 more video games this year.</p>
<p>-Expand my social circle some and find someone else who writes.*</p></blockquote>
<p>&#8212;-</p>
<p>*This is actually a tougher one than it sounds because I haven&#8217;t met a writer in person whose company I&#8217;ve enjoyed. This could be why I don&#8217;t have many friends.</p>
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As you read this I&#8217;ll be on the road toward California once again, ending my luxurious holiday vacation. I had a lot of fun with the family and I miss them already. Thanks to a rather rocking last few months of 2010, I&#8217;m pretty stoked for what&#8217;s in store in the new year. Here are some goals I&#8217;ve set for myself, separated by topic. YAY LISTS!</p>
<h3>Writing and Projects</h3>
<blockquote><p>-Complete the two scripts I have in early draft stage.</p>
<p>-Write at least 3 more scripts this year.</p>
<p>-Get all current web series ideas through the writing stage.</p>
<p>-Write 3 short films and shop them to Columbia College friends.</p>
<p>-Write Sci-Fi novel I had intended for NaNo.</p>
<p>-Keep track of every day that I write in a cool excel spreadsheet, and try to work my way up to writing something every day.</p>
<p>-Start Hilarious Henry back up, streamline that whole ish.</p>
<p><span style="text-decoration: line-through;">-Write a footnote into my blog for no other reason than amusement and self-deprecation.</span></p>
<p>-Regularly comment on writer/screenwriter blogs.</p></blockquote>
<h3>Personal Stuff</h3>
<blockquote><p>-Get a better job, one that I can stand as well as one that pays more than my current place of employment.</p>
<p>-Go on at least one road trip.</p>
<p>-Be able to pay off at least 1 of my loans.</p>
<p>-Pay off my credit card completely.</p>
<p>-See roughly double the films I saw in 2010 and use <a href="http://www.flickchart.com" target="_blank">flickchart</a> to keep track of them.</p>
<p>-Play through at least 5 more video games this year.</p>
<p>-Expand my social circle some and find someone else who writes.*</p></blockquote>
<p>&#8212;-</p>
<p>*This is actually a tougher one than it sounds because I haven&#8217;t met a writer in person whose company I&#8217;ve enjoyed. This could be why I don&#8217;t have many friends.</p>
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		<title>What Does NaNoWriMo Do For You?</title>
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		<pubDate>Sat, 13 Nov 2010 09:52:52 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>movieguyjon</dc:creator>
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<p>As you may or may not know, November is National November Write Month. Simply put, people from all walks of life sit in front of their computers for thirty days and write upward of 50,000 words. Some people write memoirs and some people write sci-fi epics, while others write about their exploits in college. <a href="http://www.salon.com/books/laura_miller/2010/11/02/nanowrimo" target="_blank">Recently, there was a post from Salon laying down some serious NaNoWriMo hate</a>. I&#8217;m not sure I agreed with the logic the author employed, but they brought up two interesting points: 1) These writers don&#8217;t spend enough time reading, and 2) Events for writers are &#8220;largely unnecessary.&#8221; It&#8217;s that second point that has me the most intrigued.</p>
<p>When I participated last year, I wrote a cathartic piece about life after college and dealing with post-graduation depression. The whole thing was a meandering mess, wobbling back and forth between fact and fiction like a kid learning to ride bicycle. I finished my story within a day of NaNo ending, energized by the daily ritual of writing I had created and the inspiration that ritual had awakened.</p>
<p>And then I didn&#8217;t write anything until the following spring.</p>
<p>Are writing events really necessary? Do we need these month long fests to write? At best these binge-writing sessions stir the creative juices around a bit, only to have them simmer and then congeal until the following year. It&#8217;s a cycle of inspiration and determination, followed by months of shame and disappointment. How is that helpful to the writing lifestyle?</p>
<p>I decided to try something different this year. Instead of participating in NaNo, I would try and establish a stable writing routine for myself that I would follow on a weekly basis and that would be toward some kind of end (as in writing a blog series or trying to get a spec script ready for pitching). While it hasn&#8217;t gotten me writing every day of the week like I had hoped it would, it&#8217;s made me prioritize my writing each week and set deadlines for myself. These deadlines have yielded much stronger results than waiting for one writing event after the other.</p>
<p>But these are just the thoughts that have been bouncing around in my head like those awesome bouncy-balls you can get at truck stops for a quarter. What do you think? Are writing events like NaNoWriMo necessary? Do they do anything for you? What do you get from this sort of event?</p>
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<p>As you may or may not know, November is National November Write Month. Simply put, people from all walks of life sit in front of their computers for thirty days and write upward of 50,000 words. Some people write memoirs and some people write sci-fi epics, while others write about their exploits in college. <a href="http://www.salon.com/books/laura_miller/2010/11/02/nanowrimo" target="_blank">Recently, there was a post from Salon laying down some serious NaNoWriMo hate</a>. I&#8217;m not sure I agreed with the logic the author employed, but they brought up two interesting points: 1) These writers don&#8217;t spend enough time reading, and 2) Events for writers are &#8220;largely unnecessary.&#8221; It&#8217;s that second point that has me the most intrigued.</p>
<p>When I participated last year, I wrote a cathartic piece about life after college and dealing with post-graduation depression. The whole thing was a meandering mess, wobbling back and forth between fact and fiction like a kid learning to ride bicycle. I finished my story within a day of NaNo ending, energized by the daily ritual of writing I had created and the inspiration that ritual had awakened.</p>
<p>And then I didn&#8217;t write anything until the following spring.</p>
<p>Are writing events really necessary? Do we need these month long fests to write? At best these binge-writing sessions stir the creative juices around a bit, only to have them simmer and then congeal until the following year. It&#8217;s a cycle of inspiration and determination, followed by months of shame and disappointment. How is that helpful to the writing lifestyle?</p>
<p>I decided to try something different this year. Instead of participating in NaNo, I would try and establish a stable writing routine for myself that I would follow on a weekly basis and that would be toward some kind of end (as in writing a blog series or trying to get a spec script ready for pitching). While it hasn&#8217;t gotten me writing every day of the week like I had hoped it would, it&#8217;s made me prioritize my writing each week and set deadlines for myself. These deadlines have yielded much stronger results than waiting for one writing event after the other.</p>
<p>But these are just the thoughts that have been bouncing around in my head like those awesome bouncy-balls you can get at truck stops for a quarter. What do you think? Are writing events like NaNoWriMo necessary? Do they do anything for you? What do you get from this sort of event?</p>
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		<title>On Those Stupid Outline Thingies</title>
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		<pubDate>Sat, 16 Oct 2010 06:42:47 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>movieguyjon</dc:creator>
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<p>5.1 GB left of 8.7 GB. I&#8217;ve been sitting at my computer for a little bit now, staring at the progress bar in the hopes that it will magically move faster and faster in the ensuing moments. Since I&#8217;ve been doing this for a bit now (like I just said), it&#8217;s probably safe to assume that it&#8217;s going to take even longer to finish. So while the download is doing it&#8217;s thing and pissing me off, I figured I would jot down some thoughts in a stream of conscious manner to break the monotony of my latest string of &#8220;well-organized&#8221; posts.</p>
<p>In short, I want to talk about outlines.</p>
<p>I hate outlines. I hate writing outlines and I hate thinking about them. I come from a method of writing that involves turning on the writing program of choice and just vomiting as many words out as I can, hoping to touch upon a compelling narrative or two in the process. I like saving that organization thing for the second draft, where I have to put thought into stuff like theme or why making the side character a cat instead of a man is hilarious. No, really. It&#8217;s funny as hell.</p>
<p>But lately I&#8217;ve started to change how I see the writing process. Call it a writer&#8217;s puberty, if you will. Suddenly, I find that I can&#8217;t write anything unless it&#8217;s got a preset structure going in. Something that would have simply been a sit-and-write before has now become an exercise in meticulous planning. The change happened with the last script I wrote (which I have YET to revise). I decided to do things different from my usual method and write out an outline to focus my writing and get things done in a shorter period of time.</p>
<p>Well, it worked. In fact, it worked so great that I got it in my brain that outlining was a good thing. Now I can&#8217;t write any kind of story without drafting up a roadmap of all the things that need to happen in the story. The problem here is that I&#8217;m still the person from before who needs to jump right in and start hammering on the keyboard like there&#8217;s no tomorrow. I still need that freedom to take the story anywhere and develop the characters as I go along.</p>
<p>4.5 GB left.</p>
<p>God, I really hate outlines. I should probably finish the one I&#8217;ve started for my horror film.</p>
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<p>5.1 GB left of 8.7 GB. I&#8217;ve been sitting at my computer for a little bit now, staring at the progress bar in the hopes that it will magically move faster and faster in the ensuing moments. Since I&#8217;ve been doing this for a bit now (like I just said), it&#8217;s probably safe to assume that it&#8217;s going to take even longer to finish. So while the download is doing it&#8217;s thing and pissing me off, I figured I would jot down some thoughts in a stream of conscious manner to break the monotony of my latest string of &#8220;well-organized&#8221; posts.</p>
<p>In short, I want to talk about outlines.</p>
<p>I hate outlines. I hate writing outlines and I hate thinking about them. I come from a method of writing that involves turning on the writing program of choice and just vomiting as many words out as I can, hoping to touch upon a compelling narrative or two in the process. I like saving that organization thing for the second draft, where I have to put thought into stuff like theme or why making the side character a cat instead of a man is hilarious. No, really. It&#8217;s funny as hell.</p>
<p>But lately I&#8217;ve started to change how I see the writing process. Call it a writer&#8217;s puberty, if you will. Suddenly, I find that I can&#8217;t write anything unless it&#8217;s got a preset structure going in. Something that would have simply been a sit-and-write before has now become an exercise in meticulous planning. The change happened with the last script I wrote (which I have YET to revise). I decided to do things different from my usual method and write out an outline to focus my writing and get things done in a shorter period of time.</p>
<p>Well, it worked. In fact, it worked so great that I got it in my brain that outlining was a good thing. Now I can&#8217;t write any kind of story without drafting up a roadmap of all the things that need to happen in the story. The problem here is that I&#8217;m still the person from before who needs to jump right in and start hammering on the keyboard like there&#8217;s no tomorrow. I still need that freedom to take the story anywhere and develop the characters as I go along.</p>
<p>4.5 GB left.</p>
<p>God, I really hate outlines. I should probably finish the one I&#8217;ve started for my horror film.</p>
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		<title>Chuck, We Need To Talk</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 13 Oct 2010 06:20:33 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>movieguyjon</dc:creator>
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<p>Can you come here a minute, Chuck? We need to talk. Yes, it&#8217;s as bad as you think it is. Sit down and let me get this off my chest before I lose my nerve.</p>
<p>This isn&#8217;t working. I&#8217;m sorry, Chuck. It&#8217;s you, not me. I can&#8217;t go on in this relationship anymore. It&#8217;s obvious that things are going nowhere and I really need a show that appreciates my sensibilities and that is able to grow with me. I&#8217;m all the way over here in season four and I feel like you&#8217;ve never really left season two. I come home after a long day&#8217;s work and turn on the television, only to find the same old schtick that I&#8217;ve seen before. If I wanted &#8220;same old,&#8221; I would have purchased an older season or watch Undercovers instead. But that&#8217;s not on on Mondays, so that leaves me with what? Weeds? Sure, I&#8217;ll only watch a half hour of television to relax in the evening. Maybe I&#8217;ll fill the rest of my night crying into a vodka bottle while listening to The Magnetic Fields.</p>
<p>But I digress.</p>
<p>I feel like we&#8217;re not in this together anymore. I wanted to see Casey have a larger arc involving his daughter. The promise of that excited me in ways I&#8217;ve not felt since you gained the Intersect 2.0 or when I found out that Scott Bakula was going to be your dad. Seeing a new side to an otherwise one dimensional character felt so right.</p>
<p>Or how about Morgan and the Buy More story arc. Here&#8217;s a character that started off nothing more than the comedic relief of this show. He was the idiot that served to lighten the mood when the spy stuff got too intense. With the most recent season, I expected to see him take more of an important role and come into his own. Hell, you promised me that this would happen last season when he became an official operative and started going on missions with you.</p>
<p>What? Hold on. Neighbor yelled something about spoilers. Give me a sec. I&#8217;ve got to reply. HOW ABOUT YOU WATCH THE SHOW WHEN IT AIRS, HUH?! MAYBE THEN YOU WOULDN&#8217;T BE SPOILED. WHORE. Can you believe that? It&#8217;s like they wait to watch things on DVD or something.</p>
<p>Where were we? Oh yeah. Us.</p>
<p>We had all this potential together. What happened? What went wrong?</p>
<p>Wait. I know what went wrong. You went back to HER. You decided that you wanted to spend all your time with Sarah, making your petty squabbles the main focus of the show. Instead of letting me get to know your friends better, you made this all about you. Do you realize how much it hurt watching the most recent episode and realizing that things would never progress between us? It was like a slap in the face, Chuck.</p>
<p>No. I won&#8217;t hear it. Don&#8217;t tell me that you can change. It&#8217;s too late. I just&#8230;I&#8230;I think you should go.</p>
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<p>Can you come here a minute, Chuck? We need to talk. Yes, it&#8217;s as bad as you think it is. Sit down and let me get this off my chest before I lose my nerve.</p>
<p>This isn&#8217;t working. I&#8217;m sorry, Chuck. It&#8217;s you, not me. I can&#8217;t go on in this relationship anymore. It&#8217;s obvious that things are going nowhere and I really need a show that appreciates my sensibilities and that is able to grow with me. I&#8217;m all the way over here in season four and I feel like you&#8217;ve never really left season two. I come home after a long day&#8217;s work and turn on the television, only to find the same old schtick that I&#8217;ve seen before. If I wanted &#8220;same old,&#8221; I would have purchased an older season or watch Undercovers instead. But that&#8217;s not on on Mondays, so that leaves me with what? Weeds? Sure, I&#8217;ll only watch a half hour of television to relax in the evening. Maybe I&#8217;ll fill the rest of my night crying into a vodka bottle while listening to The Magnetic Fields.</p>
<p>But I digress.</p>
<p>I feel like we&#8217;re not in this together anymore. I wanted to see Casey have a larger arc involving his daughter. The promise of that excited me in ways I&#8217;ve not felt since you gained the Intersect 2.0 or when I found out that Scott Bakula was going to be your dad. Seeing a new side to an otherwise one dimensional character felt so right.</p>
<p>Or how about Morgan and the Buy More story arc. Here&#8217;s a character that started off nothing more than the comedic relief of this show. He was the idiot that served to lighten the mood when the spy stuff got too intense. With the most recent season, I expected to see him take more of an important role and come into his own. Hell, you promised me that this would happen last season when he became an official operative and started going on missions with you.</p>
<p>What? Hold on. Neighbor yelled something about spoilers. Give me a sec. I&#8217;ve got to reply. HOW ABOUT YOU WATCH THE SHOW WHEN IT AIRS, HUH?! MAYBE THEN YOU WOULDN&#8217;T BE SPOILED. WHORE. Can you believe that? It&#8217;s like they wait to watch things on DVD or something.</p>
<p>Where were we? Oh yeah. Us.</p>
<p>We had all this potential together. What happened? What went wrong?</p>
<p>Wait. I know what went wrong. You went back to HER. You decided that you wanted to spend all your time with Sarah, making your petty squabbles the main focus of the show. Instead of letting me get to know your friends better, you made this all about you. Do you realize how much it hurt watching the most recent episode and realizing that things would never progress between us? It was like a slap in the face, Chuck.</p>
<p>No. I won&#8217;t hear it. Don&#8217;t tell me that you can change. It&#8217;s too late. I just&#8230;I&#8230;I think you should go.</p>
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		<title>On Writetober</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 05 Oct 2010 03:16:29 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>movieguyjon</dc:creator>
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<p>It&#8217;s October, and with it comes horror films galore. Just saw the original 13 Ghosts a few days ago and had a blast. Going to watch all of the Friday the 13th movies at some point this month as well as a bunch of really crappy horror films. Might also get a viewing of Candyman in and a bunch of films I&#8217;ve never seen before. Apart from that, I&#8217;m taking the proverbial pen to paper (lap to laptop, maybe?) and writing a horror film. It&#8217;s a film in the style of Skeleton Key and Candyman in which a main character obsesses over a mystery and it ends up being their undoing.</p>
<p>I was thinking I would write the outline this week, and then take the rest of the month to write out the script itself. Sounds simple, right?</p>
<p>Just a matter of writing it.</p>
<p>*sigh*</p>
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<p>It&#8217;s October, and with it comes horror films galore. Just saw the original 13 Ghosts a few days ago and had a blast. Going to watch all of the Friday the 13th movies at some point this month as well as a bunch of really crappy horror films. Might also get a viewing of Candyman in and a bunch of films I&#8217;ve never seen before. Apart from that, I&#8217;m taking the proverbial pen to paper (lap to laptop, maybe?) and writing a horror film. It&#8217;s a film in the style of Skeleton Key and Candyman in which a main character obsesses over a mystery and it ends up being their undoing.</p>
<p>I was thinking I would write the outline this week, and then take the rest of the month to write out the script itself. Sounds simple, right?</p>
<p>Just a matter of writing it.</p>
<p>*sigh*</p>
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		<title>On A New City, and Stuff</title>
		<link>http://jonathan-hardesty.com/2010/08/on-a-new-city-and-stuff/</link>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 31 Aug 2010 04:36:25 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>movieguyjon</dc:creator>
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<p>I suppose I should make some kind of post about life as I know it right now. Decided that I was done with Chicago and moved my ass all the way over to the west coast to live out a life of fame and fortune. That is to say, I moved to LA to try and see if this writing business will actually pan out. Whether or not this was a bad move remains to be seen. Whether or not this degree of mine was a bad move remains to be seen. Basically, I moved from one question mark to the next. But hey, that&#8217;s what adventure is, right?</p>
<p>All I know is that I haven&#8217;t really done a lot of writing since I got here and that&#8217;s NOT a good thing.</p>
<p>Feel free to ignore this post at your leisure. This is me getting back into the habit of writing.</p>
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<p>I suppose I should make some kind of post about life as I know it right now. Decided that I was done with Chicago and moved my ass all the way over to the west coast to live out a life of fame and fortune. That is to say, I moved to LA to try and see if this writing business will actually pan out. Whether or not this was a bad move remains to be seen. Whether or not this degree of mine was a bad move remains to be seen. Basically, I moved from one question mark to the next. But hey, that&#8217;s what adventure is, right?</p>
<p>All I know is that I haven&#8217;t really done a lot of writing since I got here and that&#8217;s NOT a good thing.</p>
<p>Feel free to ignore this post at your leisure. This is me getting back into the habit of writing.</p>
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		<title>Eleven Day Steampunk</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 13 Apr 2010 06:08:36 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>movieguyjon</dc:creator>
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<p>April 1st came around and two things happened: I completely forgot that it was April Fools Day and I began the screenwriting boot camp known as Script Frenzy. If you&#8217;ll recall, <a href="http://www.jonathan-hardesty.com/2010/03/28/a-most-ambitious-frenzy/" target="_self">I wrote earlier about my plans to write two scripts</a> to make up for the zero I wrote last year. Well, I&#8217;m here today to tell you that I&#8217;m done with my first script, LAMENT. It&#8217;s a Steampunk Western Revenge Flick about a father and a husband who will stop at nothing to kill the man responsible for ruining his life. There&#8217;s action, there&#8217;s drama and there&#8217;s enough steampunk to whet your appetite.</p>
<p>All in all, the script took me eleven days to write, averaging out about ten pages a day with a day or two off to keep my sanity. <a href="http://www.jonathan-hardesty.com/2010/03/30/outlining-is-useful-after-all/" target="_self">I discussed the beauty of outlining in my last post</a> and the proof was in how easy it was to bang out the script. I essentially breezed through ten pages, checked my notes, and then soared through another. Naturally, my script ended at page 93.</p>
<p>Now you might ask, &#8220;Doesn&#8217;t Script Frenzy require 100 pages?&#8221;</p>
<p>Yes, it does. This was perhaps one of the more interesting aspects to my writing binge this past week or so. By around page 85, I started to burn out. When you burn out as a writer, the first thing that goes by the wayside is the prose. While you&#8217;re generally not supposed to flower your script with prose, the details help. I perused the pages near the end and realized that I had all but dropped the prose in favor of quick action text like, &#8220;Westin charges forward, shoots guy,&#8221; or &#8220;Westin kills bad guy.&#8221; On the first day, it was more along the lines of, &#8220;Westin steps off the train, letting his bag drop to the ground. He toys with the cigarette sandwiched between his lips and tosses it aside.&#8221;</p>
<p>You get the idea.</p>
<p>The other thing that also seems to fall by the wayside is the dialog. The first few days of writing (roughly 30-40 pages) saw some interesting dialog between the characters, stuff that gave you a decent idea as to what made them tick. Granted, we&#8217;re not talking Tarantino&#8217;esque yakking, but something useful for a first draft. By the last page, no one was saying a word except for the villain and he repeated himself to an annoying extent.</p>
<p>&#8220;Hey,&#8221; you might interrupt, &#8220;weren&#8217;t you supposed to do two scripts?&#8221;</p>
<p>Busy month, indeed.</p>
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<p>April 1st came around and two things happened: I completely forgot that it was April Fools Day and I began the screenwriting boot camp known as Script Frenzy. If you&#8217;ll recall, <a href="http://www.jonathan-hardesty.com/2010/03/28/a-most-ambitious-frenzy/" target="_self">I wrote earlier about my plans to write two scripts</a> to make up for the zero I wrote last year. Well, I&#8217;m here today to tell you that I&#8217;m done with my first script, LAMENT. It&#8217;s a Steampunk Western Revenge Flick about a father and a husband who will stop at nothing to kill the man responsible for ruining his life. There&#8217;s action, there&#8217;s drama and there&#8217;s enough steampunk to whet your appetite.</p>
<p>All in all, the script took me eleven days to write, averaging out about ten pages a day with a day or two off to keep my sanity. <a href="http://www.jonathan-hardesty.com/2010/03/30/outlining-is-useful-after-all/" target="_self">I discussed the beauty of outlining in my last post</a> and the proof was in how easy it was to bang out the script. I essentially breezed through ten pages, checked my notes, and then soared through another. Naturally, my script ended at page 93.</p>
<p>Now you might ask, &#8220;Doesn&#8217;t Script Frenzy require 100 pages?&#8221;</p>
<p>Yes, it does. This was perhaps one of the more interesting aspects to my writing binge this past week or so. By around page 85, I started to burn out. When you burn out as a writer, the first thing that goes by the wayside is the prose. While you&#8217;re generally not supposed to flower your script with prose, the details help. I perused the pages near the end and realized that I had all but dropped the prose in favor of quick action text like, &#8220;Westin charges forward, shoots guy,&#8221; or &#8220;Westin kills bad guy.&#8221; On the first day, it was more along the lines of, &#8220;Westin steps off the train, letting his bag drop to the ground. He toys with the cigarette sandwiched between his lips and tosses it aside.&#8221;</p>
<p>You get the idea.</p>
<p>The other thing that also seems to fall by the wayside is the dialog. The first few days of writing (roughly 30-40 pages) saw some interesting dialog between the characters, stuff that gave you a decent idea as to what made them tick. Granted, we&#8217;re not talking Tarantino&#8217;esque yakking, but something useful for a first draft. By the last page, no one was saying a word except for the villain and he repeated himself to an annoying extent.</p>
<p>&#8220;Hey,&#8221; you might interrupt, &#8220;weren&#8217;t you supposed to do two scripts?&#8221;</p>
<p>Busy month, indeed.</p>
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		<title>Outlining Is Useful After All</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 30 Mar 2010 05:02:48 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>movieguyjon</dc:creator>
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<p>They teach you in film school that outlining your films is an important step in the screenwriting process. Oftentimes, students ignore this lesson and just wing it, letting the characters do what they &#8220;were meant to do.&#8221; This was the method I applied to writing my very first feature for Screenwriting II. I wasn&#8217;t going to let planning and plot construction ruin MY masterpiece. My characters were going to take me on a journey and it would be this grand adventure through amazing-land.</p>
<p>Well, I was an idiot.</p>
<p>You have no idea how easy it is to sit down and start writing your story when you have the basic groundwork set out in front of you. Protagonist goes here, here and here in act one. Fill in the blanks. BAM! I&#8217;ve always known that outlining is a good idea, but I&#8217;ve never really put it into practice until lately. I can already see the results as the story is more organized now in my head and I&#8217;ve got a firmer grasp on the plot than I did a few short days ago.</p>
<p>Also, I&#8217;ve got an end to my story. None of my scripts prior to this have had endings and it&#8217;s made finishing them something of a challenge. It&#8217;s unbelievably difficult to plot out a journey you don&#8217;t know the end to. The possibilities become TOO endless and the &#8220;what-ifs&#8221; start wasting valuable time, time you could be spending on the actual script itself.</p>
<p>Maybe some people out there in this cruel world can sit down and write a feature without ever outlining a single thing, but I know I&#8217;m not one of those people. Having as much planned out as possible before I sit down to write is an absolute must.</p>
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<p>They teach you in film school that outlining your films is an important step in the screenwriting process. Oftentimes, students ignore this lesson and just wing it, letting the characters do what they &#8220;were meant to do.&#8221; This was the method I applied to writing my very first feature for Screenwriting II. I wasn&#8217;t going to let planning and plot construction ruin MY masterpiece. My characters were going to take me on a journey and it would be this grand adventure through amazing-land.</p>
<p>Well, I was an idiot.</p>
<p>You have no idea how easy it is to sit down and start writing your story when you have the basic groundwork set out in front of you. Protagonist goes here, here and here in act one. Fill in the blanks. BAM! I&#8217;ve always known that outlining is a good idea, but I&#8217;ve never really put it into practice until lately. I can already see the results as the story is more organized now in my head and I&#8217;ve got a firmer grasp on the plot than I did a few short days ago.</p>
<p>Also, I&#8217;ve got an end to my story. None of my scripts prior to this have had endings and it&#8217;s made finishing them something of a challenge. It&#8217;s unbelievably difficult to plot out a journey you don&#8217;t know the end to. The possibilities become TOO endless and the &#8220;what-ifs&#8221; start wasting valuable time, time you could be spending on the actual script itself.</p>
<p>Maybe some people out there in this cruel world can sit down and write a feature without ever outlining a single thing, but I know I&#8217;m not one of those people. Having as much planned out as possible before I sit down to write is an absolute must.</p>
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		<title>A Most Ambitious Frenzy</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 29 Mar 2010 03:20:38 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>movieguyjon</dc:creator>
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<p>Last year I failed Script Frenzy. I had a good idea, but I just didn&#8217;t have the commitment to the event that I needed to see the project through. From a writing perspective, I had gotten too mired in plot and &#8220;revise-as-you-go,&#8221; a screenwriter&#8217;s worst nightmare. I would open up my script during those 5 days I wrote and start from the beginning, tweaking everything until it felt as succinct and ready-to-sell as a final draft. By that fifth day I was burned out and done with the whole mess, so I stopped and went about my business.</p>
<p>Well, that&#8217;s not going to happen this year. I&#8217;ve decided to overcompensate for my failure by writing two scripts this year for Sript Frenzy. That&#8217;s right, two scripts! The idea is that I will get my first script done within the first ten to fifteen days, and then spend the last part of the month working on my second feature. I plan to budget at least ten pages a day to my script and then write some kind of rambly-ass post on here to update how things are going.</p>
<p>This will be a very very very interesting April.</p>
<p>Allons-y!</p>
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<p>Last year I failed Script Frenzy. I had a good idea, but I just didn&#8217;t have the commitment to the event that I needed to see the project through. From a writing perspective, I had gotten too mired in plot and &#8220;revise-as-you-go,&#8221; a screenwriter&#8217;s worst nightmare. I would open up my script during those 5 days I wrote and start from the beginning, tweaking everything until it felt as succinct and ready-to-sell as a final draft. By that fifth day I was burned out and done with the whole mess, so I stopped and went about my business.</p>
<p>Well, that&#8217;s not going to happen this year. I&#8217;ve decided to overcompensate for my failure by writing two scripts this year for Sript Frenzy. That&#8217;s right, two scripts! The idea is that I will get my first script done within the first ten to fifteen days, and then spend the last part of the month working on my second feature. I plan to budget at least ten pages a day to my script and then write some kind of rambly-ass post on here to update how things are going.</p>
<p>This will be a very very very interesting April.</p>
<p>Allons-y!</p>
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		<title>Outlines Suck, But Are Awesome</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 13 May 2009 07:04:33 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>movieguyjon</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[<p>A problem I come across when screenwriting is the logistics of the plot. I have no problems placing two characters in a room and making them say cool things, but when it comes down to where things eventually end up, it becomes a different matter entirely. I&#8217;ve tried to help myself out a bit by doing the whole &#8220;outline&#8221; thing, but it always leaves me feeling like I haven&#8217;t made any progress whatsoever in my writing. Case in point, I&#8217;ve decided to take a step back and write out a step outline for a script I&#8217;m writing. I spent a few hours the other day writing what amounted to about 20 lines of outline.</p>
<p>How is THAT progress??</p>
<p>On the flip side of that, however, I now have a better idea of where I want my story to go.</p>
<p>Hrmm.</p>
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			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>A problem I come across when screenwriting is the logistics of the plot. I have no problems placing two characters in a room and making them say cool things, but when it comes down to where things eventually end up, it becomes a different matter entirely. I&#8217;ve tried to help myself out a bit by doing the whole &#8220;outline&#8221; thing, but it always leaves me feeling like I haven&#8217;t made any progress whatsoever in my writing. Case in point, I&#8217;ve decided to take a step back and write out a step outline for a script I&#8217;m writing. I spent a few hours the other day writing what amounted to about 20 lines of outline.</p>
<p>How is THAT progress??</p>
<p>On the flip side of that, however, I now have a better idea of where I want my story to go.</p>
<p>Hrmm.</p>
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